Digital ID Cards for Public Services
The question
Instructions
How to approach this advantages and disadvantages question
An advantages and disadvantages essay weighs both sides. Some questions also ask whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages: then you must pick a side.
- Introduce the trend and say what you will cover.
- One paragraph on the advantages, with an example.
- One paragraph on the disadvantages, with an example.
- If asked "do the advantages outweigh...?", give your answer in the conclusion and the introduction.
How to plan this answer
Structure
- Introduction: paraphrase the proposed digital identity card and state your answer: the advantages outweigh the disadvantages if strong safeguards are in place.
- Body 1: the advantages, with a clear topic sentence, covering convenience, fewer documents to carry and reduced fraud through stronger identity checks.
- Body 2: the disadvantages, with a clear topic sentence, covering the risk of a large central database being breached, privacy concerns and people who cannot access digital services.
- Body 3: a judgement on whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, explaining what safeguards such as decentralised data and legal limits would make this true.
- Conclusion: restate your answer and finish with a concrete example, such as a patient booking an appointment or a pensioner who cannot use a smartphone.
Idea bank
- One secure login that gives access to tax records, healthcare and banking, which replaces many separate passwords.
- A central database that, if breached, could expose the personal records of millions of people in one incident.
- An older person without a smartphone or internet access who could be shut out of services that move entirely online.
- Reduced identity fraud through stronger verification, which protects people from criminals who open accounts in their name.
- Privacy concern: a single identity card could allow the state to track which services a person uses and when.
Useful vocabulary
- to verify identity: A digital card would let services verify identity quickly and securely.
- a single point of failure: A central database becomes a single point of failure if it is hacked.
- a data breach: A data breach could expose sensitive medical and financial records.
- to be excluded from: Citizens without a smartphone could be excluded from essential services.
- to centralise: Centralising records makes them easier to manage but more attractive to criminals.
- to pose a privacy risk: A detailed profile of every citizen would pose a serious privacy risk.
- to outweigh: In my view, the convenience of one login outweighs the risks only with strong safeguards.
- to streamline: The scheme would streamline applications for benefits and healthcare.
- to safeguard: Strict laws must safeguard personal data from misuse.
- opt-in: An opt-in system would let citizens choose whether to link their accounts.
Common mistakes
- Listing advantages and disadvantages without stating which outweighs the other and why.
- Leaving out the concrete example in the conclusion, which the task asks for.
- Confusing an identity card with identity theft, which is the crime the card would help to prevent.
- Making claims about specific countries' digital ID systems without being certain of the details.
Examiner tip: Use topic sentences that name the point and its significance, such as 'The main risk is a single breach,' so the reader can follow your structure without rereading.
Model answers by band score
Written for this question to show what changes from one band to the next. Try the task yourself first, then compare.
Band 6 answer
Why this is band 6
- Covers advantages, disadvantages and a clear answer to 'do the advantages outweigh', with an example (Estonia).
- Ideas are relevant but general ('very convenient', 'very dangerous') and linking is simple ('The first... Another... However').
- Errors are noticeable ('in few minutes', 'the government use', 'it make life easier') though meaning stays clear, and vocabulary is repetitive.
- Band 7 would develop each point with consequences, vary the vocabulary (e.g. 'streamline', 'data breach') and control agreement more reliably.
Band 7 answer
Why this is band 7
- Clear structure with advantages, disadvantages, and a direct answer to the second question, backed by the relevant example of Estonia.
- Good range of vocabulary and structures ('streamline', 'impersonation', 'independent oversight') with few errors.
- Ideas are generally well supported, but the Estonia example is brief and the solutions in paragraph four are somewhat stated rather than argued.
- Band 8 would explain consequences more precisely (e.g. cost of a single breach) and use more natural, varied cohesion.
Band 8 answer
Why this is band 8
- The introduction answers the question directly, and each paragraph begins with a clear topic sentence ('The most obvious benefit...', 'The drawbacks are real, however').
- Developed, well-selected support: Estonia's online services, a 'single breach' exposing medical, financial and tax records at once.
- Vocabulary is precise and flexible ('friction', 'a tempting target', 'a matter of design') and errors are rare.
- Band 9 would integrate the argument more seamlessly, avoiding the neat list-like sequence of points, and weigh the trade-off with even more insight.
Band 9 answer
Why this is band 9
- The introduction frames the issue vividly ('patchwork of passwords and paperwork') and gives a clear, qualified position, which is fully sustained.
- Support is developed and precise, linking each disadvantage to a concrete consequence and each solution to a specific safeguard.
- Language is sophisticated and natural ('the spectre of surveillance', 'stem from design choices') and error-free.
- Cohesion is effortless: the 'Yet... With such conditions in place... In sum' sequence moves the argument forward rather than merely listing points.
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