Loneliness in Growing Cities
The question
Loneliness is becoming more common in large cities, where many people live alone and rarely know their neighbours.
Why do you think loneliness is increasing in urban areas? Should it be treated as a public health issue or as a social one?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Instructions
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
• Answer every part of the question fully.
• Give reasons and examples for each answer.
• Make your position clear and keep your answers relevant to the question.
• Organise your ideas into clear paragraphs and use cohesive devices.
How to approach this two-part question question
A two-part question asks two direct questions. Answer both fully, one in each body paragraph.
- Paraphrase the topic and say how you will answer both questions.
- Body 1 answers question one with reasons and an example.
- Body 2 answers question two with reasons and an example.
- Conclude with a short summary of both answers.
How to plan this answer
Structure
- Introduction: paraphrase the rise in urban loneliness, then briefly answer both parts of the question (the reasons, and whether it is a health or social issue).
- Body 1: reasons loneliness is rising in cities, such as high housing costs that encourage living alone, long commutes and fewer shared public spaces.
- Body 2: the case for treating loneliness as a public health issue, linking it to mental and physical health and to referral schemes run through health services.
- Body 3: the case for treating it as a social issue, focusing on community spaces, neighbourhood design and local groups.
- Conclusion: state which framing you find more useful and explain why the other framing alone is incomplete.
Idea bank
- Housing costs: in expensive cities, many young adults rent small flats alone rather than sharing, so they have fewer daily conversations.
- Working patterns: long commutes and unpredictable shifts leave little time for building friendships in the local area.
- Loss of shared spaces: the closure of libraries, pubs and community centres removes places where strangers meet regularly.
- Social prescribing: in England, GPs can refer patients to local groups, treating isolation as a health concern and a social one at the same time.
- Policy example: the UK appointed a minister for loneliness in 2018, showing that governments can treat it as a policy matter.
- Digital contact: frequent messaging does not always replace in-person contact, so people can be connected online and still feel isolated.
Useful vocabulary
- social isolation: Social isolation has been linked to poorer mental and physical health.
- a sense of belonging: Local events can give residents a sense of belonging.
- to fall through the cracks: Older residents living alone can fall through the cracks of social services.
- social prescribing: Social prescribing lets GPs refer patients to community activities.
- the anonymity of city life: The anonymity of city life can make friendships harder to form.
- to strike up a conversation: Many commuters never strike up a conversation with their neighbours.
- a root cause: Long working hours can be a root cause of isolation.
- to tackle: Councils could tackle the problem by funding shared community spaces.
- a public health concern: Doctors increasingly regard loneliness as a public health concern.
Common mistakes
- Answering only one part of the question, usually the reasons, and giving the health-or-social judgement only a single sentence.
- Treating loneliness purely as a personal problem, without linking it to housing, transport or the design of neighbourhoods.
- Blaming social media alone for urban loneliness without evidence or without considering other causes.
- Describing the issue in general terms such as 'people are busy' rather than naming a specific urban mechanism.
- Stating a view on the framing question but never explaining why one framing is more useful than the other.
Examiner tip: Answer both parts in separate paragraphs, and finish with a clear view on which framing is more useful, explaining why the other framing alone is incomplete.
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