Teaching Young People Money Management
The question
Many school leavers enter adult life without knowing how to budget, save or manage credit cards and loans.
What are the main reasons why so many young people lack financial skills, and what could schools and families do to improve this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Instructions
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
• Explain the main causes of the problem clearly and specifically.
• Propose practical solutions and explain how each would work.
• Give examples to support your ideas.
• Organise your ideas into clear paragraphs and use cohesive devices.
How to approach this problem and solution question
A problem and solution essay needs specific causes or problems first, then realistic solutions that match them.
- Introduce the issue and why it matters.
- Body 1: the main problems or causes, with examples.
- Body 2: solutions that clearly link to each problem, saying who should act.
- Conclude by summarising the best solution.
How to plan this answer
Structure
- Introduction: paraphrase the lack of financial skills among school leavers and state the two main reasons you will explore: the curriculum and the way families talk about money.
- Body 1: the reasons young people lack financial skills, covering a crowded school timetable, parents who feel unsure themselves and aggressive marketing of credit.
- Body 2: what schools could do, such as a compulsory personal finance module with practical tasks like budgeting and reading payslips.
- Body 3: what families could do, such as giving pocket money with a budget, sharing household bills and opening a savings account together.
- Conclusion: summarise the causes and suggest that schools and families work together, since each reinforces the other.
Idea bank
- A school budgeting exercise in which pupils plan a month of spending on a limited income and must balance their accounts.
- Buy-now-pay-later schemes advertised online, which make borrowing look painless to teenagers and young adults.
- A family discussing the weekly food shop and utility bills openly, so the child sees money being planned.
- Pocket money tied to a savings goal, such as a phone or a trip, which teaches delayed gratification.
- Counter-argument: schools already have heavy curriculum demands, so financial education must be integrated rather than added on.
Useful vocabulary
- to be ill-equipped to: Many school leavers are ill-equipped to manage a monthly budget.
- to get into debt: Easy access to credit can lead young adults to get into debt quickly.
- a personal finance module: A personal finance module can cover savings, borrowing and tax.
- to live beyond one's means: Some young people start to live beyond their means once they receive their first salary.
- to build good habits: Regular saving at a young age helps to build good habits.
- to set aside: Setting aside a small sum each month is a sensible first step.
- to take out a loan: Students sometimes take out a loan without understanding the interest charged.
- to be lured by: Young people are often lured by offers of instant credit.
- to demystify: Practical lessons can demystify banking and credit cards.
- to model good habits: Parents who model good habits show children how to plan spending.
Common mistakes
- Writing only about schools or only about families when the question asks what both could do.
- Assuming that all young people are in debt, which is a generalisation the question does not support.
- Listing solutions without explaining how they would work in a school or home.
- Confusing debit cards with credit cards, which weakens the discussion of borrowing.
Examiner tip: Keep the two parts of the question visibly separate in your paragraphs, and give at least one practical activity for schools and one for families.
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